My Warband

Hi everyone, because i couldnt decide on what warband i wanted to play with i decided to create my own and with the permission of my group use it.

At the moment iv only got a bit of the story and thats it so i would appreciate and ideas you may have and if i use then i will put your name in the bottom bit (cant remeber what its called lol), i will update this post as i move forward in the creation.


‘Long ago when the first Sigmar’s comet plummeted to the ground, it opened a door to the Void a door that is said to only open once every twenty centuries when Sigmar’s comet shall descend once again, or so that is as the prophecy is foretold as it didn’t exclaim the horrors that await.’



‘As the prophecy read, twenty centuries later Sigmar’s Comet crashed into the forsaken dirt once again and reopened a seeming less empty door, and from that door came a swarm of monstrous creatures far worse then those of chaos’

Edit: I have now started to create a second warband that i will keep a secret until near completion then i will put it on the furoms for any surgestions you may have, however i will continue with this warband when i take a break from the second i would still appreciate any surgestion and thank you in advance.

'Few mortals could tell the difference of the creatures which emerged... some claimed them as another band of chaos mutated followers... some said they were something else entirely.. a cold breed, where the will of chaos would hunger for death and torment, these seems to not.

They stalked the streets learning from the inhabitants of mordheim, learnign their words, their fighitng styles, even their pasts.

With each indivdual archived in their minds thes enew breed could impersonate their fihting styles ro requote their every word spoken...

Chaos may chill the soul with fear, but these... these can claim it for their own and use it as noe of their personas.

duce co productions on how not to write stories

Thank you Duce for the help. Do you have any thoughts on anything else i would be grateful. May i also ask for you surname.