Ummmm why dose he have a rune fang?. Those swords are for the elector counts and high ranking generals. Unless he stole it from altdorf maybe? and are you going to use the double pistol as a pistol brace? and the work on that cloke is steller btw! and if you want to make him look like the reiklander he is, than paint the slevs just white and add a blue stripe too the cloke as well.
Oh and paint the skin with elf flesh, the people of the empire are pale most of the time